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Lonely nights
and
rooms full of silence
cause me to think
too much
overanalyzing everything...

          I am my own patient shrinking my self...

          ...who are you?
          ...what did it mean?
          ...when was that?
          ...where did you go?
          ...why did you do that?
          ...how did that happen?


A penny for your thoughts
or maybe a dollar
so I can get the whole score
all the scenes played out
right before me

Let it out
lay it on me
before my thoughts become
a straight jacket
confining me within...

Lonely nights
and
rooms full of silence
©2005-2009 ~paintedpoet
:iconpaintedpoet:

Author's Comments

Silence really can be awfully deafening sometimes... even through the TV and the radio and the !!

Written 08/31/05

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:iconpoetaestinvia:
This is something that I bet most people will be able to connect to.
My favorite part is:
"A penny for your thoughts
or maybe a dollar
so I can get the whole score"

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And how.
:iconpaintedpoet:
Thank you kindly. I was thinking a penny wouldn't get me very far...

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"Catch the vigorous horse of your mind." Zen saying

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:iconvampwulfe:
*blinks* Lovely, ....a definite fav. I catch myself in this, alot. Great work. Not saying more because I dont care to spill the severe likeness of this to my life lol. ^^ :hug: Great great job ^^

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---*Scurries off to chase down a random shiny object*


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:iconpaintedpoet:
:wow: Thank you so very much! You're awesome =D :hug:

So glad you read, you liked, and painfully identified *shrugs and sighs*

--
"Catch the vigorous horse of your mind." Zen saying

Member & Support Admin of =FloridaDeviants
Member of *Circleoffriends *burn-p0etry
:iconvampwulfe:
^^ *blushes a bit* I dunno about the me being awesome part, but it was well written and I love it. ^^ hehe

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---*Scurries off to chase down a random shiny object*


:boogie:Wulfeys Gallery:boogie:
:iconpaintedpoet:
=D

--
"Catch the vigorous horse of your mind." Zen saying

Member & Support Admin of =FloridaDeviants
Member of *Circleoffriends *burn-p0etry
:iconpoetaestinvia:
Not with inflation the way it is.

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And how.
:icontheprophetmoses:
Maybe thats why "crazy" people talk to themselves... stupid silence...

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-Matt
Digital Arts Front - Join the Revolution!
:iconpaintedpoet:
Hmmm.... that's a thought!

--
"Catch the vigorous horse of your mind." Zen saying

Member & Support Admin of =FloridaDeviants
Member of *Circleoffriends *burn-p0etry

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